Mary Ryan's Efficient Argument


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I thought Mary P. Ryan’s article on antebellum women in Utica, New York was one of the more convincing and thorough pieces we have read so far.  I think it was organized excellently and used its sources very well.  “The Power of Women’s Networks: A Case Study of Female Moral Reform in Antebellum America” made an effective argument about how women came together and the powers that they did and did not have.

Ryan begins with a quick historiography of arguments made about women and power in the antebellum era.  She then introduces the American Female Reform Society and proposes that the association “offers an excellent opportunity to examine the relationship between women’s power and the history of the sex/gender system.  It may illuminate the nature, sources, and ambiguous historical impact of women’s efforts to exert influence on society at large” (67).  Next, Ryan narrows in on the Utica Society.  Dave “Big Wave” Sierra points out that it must be noted that her use of the Utica Society is very specific to the time and place.  Ryan explains how Utica’s population, social and class makeup, and economy lent itself to the many associations that formed in the town.  After establishing that associations had a strong hold on most social aspects of the society, Ryan does an excellent job of explaining why Utica women had more power in these associations than expected.  The detailed backstory of how the Utica Female Reform Society sprang up and gained members really sold me on the idea that this town is an interesting case of women being able to exert power outside the home in the antebellum period.

Ryan then went into a minutely detailed description of how the association operated to exert influence over the sexual behavior of society.  She discussed how the women were trying to better society as well as protect their own interests (usually as mothers).  Ryan argues that these dual interests allowed women to establish a direct, collective, organized effort, which aimed to control behavior and change values in the community at large” (73).  In order to make these claims, Ryan uses her sources extremely well.  She gives specific newspaper articles, meeting minutes, and individual testimonies to show how these women organized and came together to gain power.  I did feel, though, that some of her more empirical arguments were thin.  Ryan also did a good job of showing the influence of these women with the narrative about the debate between the Society and the city’s clerks.  This story did a good job of illuminating how women in these various associations had the ability (when working together) to bring flaws in society to light.  Overall, I think that Ryan’s argument was strong because of her organization and effective use of sources.  While towards the end of the piece, she tries to use Utica to generalize a little too much for my taste, I still believe that it was an efficient argument.

One, Eli Caldwell’s makes an extremely interesting point with his comparison of joke-telling moralities with the way the Female Moral Reform Society behaved.  It did seem like the women just did not realize that their push for sexual purity would also put them down in different aspects of society.  He concedes that maybe the women thought that once they cleaned up society, they could separate themselves.  I agree with that, but would also add that at this time the idea of our modern day feminism did not really exist.  I would maybe even argue that women of this era rarely wished or pushed for the complete equality that we see currently.  This, though, is a very broad statement, and I am sure that it could possibly be easily countered with more research.