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As I began to look over my posts, I noticed that I should pay more attention to the blog posts. I have noticed that I am missing one blog post and that I never posted my presentation post. I typed it up but I just realized that I did not submit my post, it was just labeled as draft so I went ahead and submitted it. In order for me to be successful in anything, I must pay attention to due dates or any details because my posts tended to be done in the day that it was due instead of being done calmly ahead of time. If I do not, my small mistakes will accumulate to a catastrophe. Due to my missing posts, it is somewhat difficult to see my progress since I cannot see the evolution of my writing but I did notice that there is a huge gap between my first post and latest post. My first post was a large paragraph that only did what it was told to do, analyze the reading. My latest post also analyzed the reading but it also included comparisons to similar events rather than just focusing on the topic. I guess it means that not only should I focus on the assigned work but that I should also have an open mind to outside material.
Overall, I enjoyed reading the posts of my classmates. They usually had an idea that I have not considered. But the thing that I want to write about is the end result of a post, mainly how it looks. What I am trying to say is that there are 2 types of posts, the ones with a large block of paragraphs (such as here and here), and those that have multiple paragraphs (here and here while the midterm reviews tend to also be written in paragraphs, such as here). Naturally, the length and number of paragraphs varies from topic to topic as well as how a person chooses to present their information. But my main point is that a person should not feel the urge to cram everything into one paragraph. It is ok to split the ideas into multiple paragraphs if it is needed. If not, then a whole paragraph is ok. lastly, the quality of the posts vastly improved. the ones in the beginning kind of had a feeling of summarizing the text or the analysis wasn’t pushed forward enough. the more recent posts became much more bolder in explaining their thoughts.

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